page 10+11 edit

Flooded BG

Can anyone can help with my perspective? Like a paint over to show the correct perspective.

More Drawings

I drew multiples on each page to offer different options. (except for the before-after kick) :)

BG Page 4 and part of 12

I'm going to bump the contrast and make the space one more 'sketchy'.  Also, I think I'm going to make that bg in the cellar completely white.  Just a moment for page 6 and the rest of 12.

rough paint

I haven't had time to go back and work on the other one. I'm going to keep cleaning them up tonight. 

the two other shots

revised pan

And the new final shot