Hey crystal. Sorry to give you the run around with this, but I think we're switching back to the pipe chimney. Nic was reworking those boards and uploaded them a little while ago.
otherwise, I think the values are working nicely and I really like the lines you used for the stones, but I think the stones could be a bit bigger so they are more subtle. I think the perspective could be a bit better too. I love how much white space you're using too!
with the second one, the top part is feeling like a roof when it should be the inside of the chimney that he is falling from. also think about where the text is going to be so you can keep that area white. It might also be nice to tone down the values on the background so it separates from the foreground. and the perspective is a bit off.
Hey crystal. Sorry to give you the run around with this, but I think we're switching back to the pipe chimney. Nic was reworking those boards and uploaded them a little while ago.
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otherwise, I think the values are working nicely and I really like the lines you used for the stones, but I think the stones could be a bit bigger so they are more subtle. I think the perspective could be a bit better too. I love how much white space you're using too!
with the second one, the top part is feeling like a roof when it should be the inside of the chimney that he is falling from. also think about where the text is going to be so you can keep that area white. It might also be nice to tone down the values on the background so it separates from the foreground. and the perspective is a bit off.
can you fix my perspective lines? I'm horrible at perspective
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