I love the colors! It's looking really good! the only problem I'm really seeing is that the perspective is off. the horizon line in Nic's boards were completely off the page. and while I really love the decoration on the top of the house, it's horizon line is on the middle of the page. also, you might want to kick down the values on those clouds. If I squint it's really starting to blend in with the house, and I have a feeling it will blend in a lot with her too when she's painted in.
also we're putting a white border around the paintings with the first brush that jeanie uploaded to google drive. there is also a style test on there that has helped me out a lot in seeing how she's thinking about it.
I love the colors! It's looking really good! the only problem I'm really seeing is that the perspective is off. the horizon line in Nic's boards were completely off the page. and while I really love the decoration on the top of the house, it's horizon line is on the middle of the page. also, you might want to kick down the values on those clouds. If I squint it's really starting to blend in with the house, and I have a feeling it will blend in a lot with her too when she's painted in.
ReplyDeletealso we're putting a white border around the paintings with the first brush that jeanie uploaded to google drive. there is also a style test on there that has helped me out a lot in seeing how she's thinking about it.
ReplyDeletethanks Steven, I'll work on knocking back the clouds and I asked Jeanie for help on the perspective.
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